AM ESOL Online - 11-15-22 Agenda Community: Resources -News & Housekeeping (Thanksgiving reminder) -Journal Writing (write a formal email) -Formal and Informal email phrases (class page link) How to Write an Email (ellii- activity and review) --------------------------- move to next class... -Conversation Practice ======================================= Journal Writing - Introduction brochure bro shur brochure (noun) a small book or magazine containing pictures and information about a product or service. "a holiday brochure" choose chu zzzz word wohrd words (plural) wohrdzzz phrases (more than one word) ph f fraaa zehz -Formal and Informal email phrases (MyEnglishTeacher) https://www.myenglishteacher.eu/blog/formal-and-informal-email-phrases/ Review ------------------------- Journal Writing 10 Minutes 3 parts of a note Greeting Who are you What is the reason for your email email: teachermarianne.walc@gmail.com ----------------------------- Ama Hello Teacher Good morning Teacher Marianne I want to let you know I am still in Ghana. I try to enter this class every day. But the internet in my country is not good every day. Antoine Pardon me I have some trouble with my wifi. I have a lot of problems with my wifi. 2 things to try. 1. Do not have many apps open. 2. See if the wifi is better in another room of your home. Valerie Vian I make chicken and rice. I am making chicken and rice. I bake? Thanksgiving. I bake for Thanksgiving. I love Christmas with my family. Merry Christmas. (Happy Holidays.) Rajaa Greeting? Name and address and city and phone number. Dear Mr Thomas, I'm writing for you to have your permission for me and my student to visit your company any day you want/accept/prefer. Would you tell me back please. Sincerely, Rajaa I. Dear Mr Thomas, I'm writing to you to ask for/get your permission for me and my student to visit your company any day you want/accept/prefer. Would you email me back please. Sincerely, Rajaa Ixxxxxxxxxxxx Stephane Did you write an email? Tell me? I will speak. Dear Mr Jones, I am writing to you to ask for your permission for me and friends to visit your university Monday, December 10 at 1:00 p.m. for a moment of relaxation with friends. Please confirm me your attendance by email. Sincerely, Stephane K....... Dear Mr Jones, I am writing to you to ask for your permission for me and friends to visit your university Monday, December 10 at 1:00 p.m. for a moment of relaxation with friends. Please confirm me your attendance by email. Please confirm your availability by email. Please confirm by email that you will be available at that time. Sincerely, Stephane K....... 1pm 1PM (informal) 1:00 p.m. 1:00 P.M. (formal) ========================== Break 10 - 10:20 =============================== From : antoinelxxxx@yahoo.fr To Whom you may concern To whom 'it' may concern From : antoinelxxxx@yahoo.fr To Whom it may concern I'm happy to write this letter to Worcester Public School in order to inform the staff, and Mrs Kristin in particulary that I'm very interested to participate at Commercial Driver School that will start in Junuary 2023. Thank you in advance for your comprehension. Antoine Louis. Cc: Teacher Marianne. To Whom It May Concern To whom it may concern (*in French we add: p/j add some list/document- but not in English) I'm happy to write this letter to Worcester Public Schools in order to inform the staff, and Ms Kristin in particular, that I'm very interested to participate in Commercial Driver School that will start in January 2023. Thank you in advance for your understanding. Attached is the file. Sincerely, Antoine Attached file: Project X120 Diturie Dear Rajaa. I would like to see a movie together, the cinema is located at Blackstone Valley 14 Kinema de Lux. My email is xxxxxxxxxxxx. I would be very happy if you would come, dear lady, thank you Madam Dear Rajaa, I would like to see a movie together, the cinema is located at Blackstone Valley 14 Cinema de Lux. My email is xxxxxxxxxxxx. I would be very happy if you would come, dear lady, thank you Madam. Signoff/Closing/Signature Thanky you, Diturie Valerie dear mayor of the city of Worcester I'm writing to you to ask you permission to organize the birthday party for my child in the green hill park, Saturday November 27 at 2 pm. I will so happy if you're accepting. I'm waiting you're email. Sincerely. Valerie M Dear Mayor of the City of Worcester, I'm writing to you to ask your permission to organize a birthday party for my child in Green Hill Park, Saturday November 27 at 2:00 P.M. (formal) I will be so happy if you give your permission. if you accept my request. if you say yes. I'm waiting you're email. I will wait for your email response. I look forward to hearing from you. I will wait until I receive your email. Sincerely, Valerie M.............. ============================= How to Write an Email (ellii, int) - continued.... Reviewed: Introduction to Emailing (excluding Replying to Email) ------------------------------- Safety Tips all caps = emergency / flaming OPEN ME NOW!!! not FREE for you today only ONLY 4 U DEADLINE MIDNIGHt legal leee gahl legit leh jiht legitimate leh jih tih maht it is good it is official it is legal Psst. Come let me tell you a secret. RSVP respondez vous s'il vous plait points period % !!! 2x two times the points 3x three times the point earn/get points for spending $50 promote = tell loudly tell something good about a product or service promotion pro mo schuhn promotional pro mo schuhn ahl sign siiiii hgn signature sihg nah churh ------------------------ Passwords Weak Passwords password password1 passwordpassword yourname Strong Password a phrase variety = mixture or numbers and letters yourfavoritemovietitle0rbook yourfavoriteexpression mix in capital letters lowercase letters numbers sleeplessinseattle sl33pl3ssins3attl3 sl33pl3ssins3attl3 plus a character !@#$%^&*() sl33pl3ssins3attl3## ----------------------------------- Email Checklist Attachments carbon copy CC someone copied on the whole email and can read the whole email attachment I am attaching a document to this email ---------------------------------- Comprehension Check-In email what does email mean? what does the word email mean what is the definition of email. e mail e = electronic electronic mail digital = electronic ebook e = electronic (computers) electronic book digital recipient Subject line The subject line should be brief, clear, easy to undersatand It does not need a full sentence. Subject: Party on Friday xxxxxxxSubject: There will be a party on Friday next week please come if you can . What does Antoine not need today. Antoine does not need interruptions. What does it need? What does it not need? What doesn't it need? What is not necessary to include in a subject line/field. What isn't necessary to include in a subject line/field. Answer is: a complete sentence ... Because it is too many words, not brief Subject should be: brief clear easy to understand Subject: Homework (Good example) Subject: The homework is due today at 5pm and please be on time. (Bad example) We complete 1 -4 of comprehension quiz. ========================================= Class is over. It is past 11:30 AM